Barely 11 pages into the "Faces" sequel, I have already gone back to edit. Had to change the time of day at the start from late afternoon to midday in order to fit more action into the first day, i.e., the first chapter. I've gone back to modify paragraphs of exposition to move the information into conversation and vice versa.
In spite of that, I added 4 pages today, and Tracy is about to embark on her "case." She's using her skills as a problem-solver alongside her lover, lawyer Alex Laughlin, an idea introduced at the end of "Two Faces Two Faced".
Next up, setting the crucial scene that will lead Tracy into trouble--straight into the camp of some very bad people.
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