Thursday, August 1, 2013

Delicate Balance

Not accomplishing much today. Yesterday, I spent a lot of the afternoon and evening enduring a migraine, and today I've been trying to keep eye-strain to a minimum to avoid another one. That being said, I did add some to "Resistance," a passage which requires a very long narrative by one person. I keep looking for ways to break it up with some action by the other characters, but I also don't want it to run on too long or recover much old ground. It's a delicate balance to achieve. This is a pivotal scene though, in which main character Dee learns what's really going on and how her worldview needs to change to fit reality. While this is a crucial and tricky segment, I'm itching to get back to the more fun passages to come where there's more action.

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